Ok so when I chose chapter two it skips the first day and starts on day two and plays until the end of chapter one, I'm on Android version the newest one with chapter two but it just doesn't seem to work or there was a bug with the code and it replays chapter one. Just a heads up is all game is really cool so far
Edit: I see ok so all the stuff after day one is chapter two i understand now
i've checked and it was quite exact the same as chapter 1, just wonder if window version got any bugs, plus the broswer version only include indoor scene, not allowing to go outside like full version so im quite sure it was a bug or something else
To be fair, my computer is rather old and isn't eligible for windows 11, however it can run Roblox with very few problems, so I'd expect it to be able to run this game. I noticed that there are shaders in the files, so maybe add a way to turn off the ones that aren't needed? It just seems like it didn't take into account lower end devices and thus isn't properly optimized to run on them.
maybe it's just my device, but the Android version is COMPLETELY broken, at the point i can't even play the game, after selecting the chapter the screen just turns black and nothing else happens
I love the game and can't wait for the next update's date to be announced but could you add some replayable events that you could go to anytime while progressing the story or (replayable side quests) to increase the playtime
Are the grammar mistakes added intentionally to convey an informal register? They seemed quite jarring to me while I was reading it and there were also quite a few spots where I found the phrasing somewhat awkward.
Day 1
"This is the second week in a row that he skips sex.." --> "This is the second week in a row that he's skipped sex.." "Search the Gift in the Drawer" --> "Search for the Gift in the Drawer" "He already seen me go in there!" --> "He's already seen me go in there!" "I hear water... is that you?" -- This, at least to me, sounds really awkward. I don't think I've ever heard someone use the phrase, "hear water". Perhaps, you could use "I hear water splashing... is that you?" or "I hear water dripping(onto the floor)... is that you?" "I-I'm making a m-mess w-washing dishes!" -- This, to me, sounds like she's intentionally making mess(especially with the exclamation mark). "I-I'm just making such a m-mess w-washing dishes." could be better. "ook, make sure to mop after..." --> "ook, make sure to mop up after..."
"Now...I think its best to start from the bathroom" --> "Now...I think it's best to start from the bathroom" "Mr .Mongus?" --> "Mr. Mongus?" -- Misplaced full stop "At first glance it looks like its twice the size of Phil's" --> "At first glance it looks like it's twice the size of Phil's"
Day 2
"Maybe I need to take them for some time..." -- sounds a bit stiff, "Maybe they (will) need some time to take effect" or "They might need some time to take effect" could be better.
"Todays task: Cleaning the dishes!" --> "Today's task: Cleaning the dishes!" -- Don't know whether this is intentional "This is the biggest one i've ever seen..." --> "This is the biggest one I've ever seen..." -- Don't know whether this is intentional either
/"I was so close to make a BIIIG mistake..." --> "I was so close to making a BIIIG mistake..."
Day 3
Although this on the surface appears to look like an example preposing("That thing it looks terrifying" or "That bit I can understand"), it's not grammatical here. "If one a night it's not working..." --> "If one a night is not working"
Day 4
"This pills don't seem to work at all...) --> "These pills don't seem to work at all..." Oh, and the "promessed" misspelling that other commenters have mentioned. I actually thought that was a cutesy stylistic choice the first time around.I find this one rather humorous. "They're very sensible..." --> "They're very sensitive...""I think I know what it means for Manual-Release but..." --> "I think I know what it means by Manual-Release but..." -- You could also add quotation marks around Manual-Release"...on your basement?" --> "...in your basement?" Pretty sure you don't add apostrophes when there's no contractions. "I-I'am-what?!" --> "I-I am-what?!""I don't know what did you do..." --> "I don't know what you did...""...if somehow I will be cured from my condition..." --> "if somehow I am cured from my condition...""I will let you live on my apartment rent free FOREVER!!" --> "I will let you live in my apartment rent free FOREVER!!""Than I'll put my all into it!!" --> "Then I'll put my all into it!!""I know what do I have to do now..." --> "I know what I have to do now..." "Send me the position"??? A what?? --> "Send me the location" Lastly, there is a misspelling for "pharmacist" as "farmacist" but that seems intentional(?). Overall, a great and enjoyable game!
Can't wait to see more of this game its got me hooked! If i were to change one thing about the plot it would be to keep the landlord delusional and not know what's going on instead of randomly checking cameras and seeing her. With that being said I really hope you frequently update this. Not many good nsfw side scrollers with this art style so keep up the great work!
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Do you have a possible ETA or a range for the next update? I'm ready for the next one already
The animations are really cute and hot. Continue by any means.
I will! Thank you!
Really cool game i enjoyed it waiting for next update
Thank you so much!
art style is so gooddd and finally someone satisfy girly need for this type of game uwu ready to support and can't wait for your next update <3
Thank you so much!!!! :D
Ok so when I chose chapter two it skips the first day and starts on day two and plays until the end of chapter one, I'm on Android version the newest one with chapter two but it just doesn't seem to work or there was a bug with the code and it replays chapter one. Just a heads up is all game is really cool so far
Edit: I see ok so all the stuff after day one is chapter two i understand now
Now I understand why people are getting confused.
This isn't a bug, it's just a very unclear feature!
I should add a chapter transition to make it clearer.
If you click on Chapter 1, you will automatically progress through every chapter.
Ah yeah I see that now it makes more sense to me too, looking forward to new updates
I wonder why chapter 2 is the exact same like the 1st chapter, its just cut out the first part a bit, thought it was sth new
What do you mean the exact same? You sure you didn't play the browser version?
Because only the downloadable version is updated
i've checked and it was quite exact the same as chapter 1, just wonder if window version got any bugs, plus the broswer version only include indoor scene, not allowing to go outside like full version so im quite sure it was a bug or something else
No, thats IS a chapter 2. Chapter 1 is with the boyfriend in it.
ohhhhhh i got it, thanks
Does anyone know when the next update will come?
Had me on the drugs, I tack those edibles.
xD
this game is incredibly laggy, like less than 1fps kind of laggy.
Weird, no one has reported this problem before.
To be fair, my computer is rather old and isn't eligible for windows 11, however it can run Roblox with very few problems, so I'd expect it to be able to run this game. I noticed that there are shaders in the files, so maybe add a way to turn off the ones that aren't needed? It just seems like it didn't take into account lower end devices and thus isn't properly optimized to run on them.
Unfortunately, there aren't any shaders that can be removed.
I'm not an experienced dev so there is probably something I messed up or that I'm missing.
Does the web version do the same thing?
Maybe is something that I added on v 0.2...
Yes, the same issue is present in the web version. I'll download an earlier version and see if it works better.
edit: Just noticed that previous versions are unavailable.
web issue just download and play dude
Un discord peut-être ?
Nope, no discord yet
C'est prévu ?
maybe it's just my device, but the Android version is COMPLETELY broken, at the point i can't even play the game, after selecting the chapter the screen just turns black and nothing else happens
Someone else had the same bug, but I really don't know how to fix it.
Sorry :C
I love the game and can't wait for the next update's date to be announced but could you add some replayable events that you could go to anytime while progressing the story or (replayable side quests) to increase the playtime
Thank you so much!
Yes, I will do that.
I don't know when tho :|
It's finally on mobile
If you looking for Female VA on your game... I am trying to get into this market! I would love to do a volunteer job to get experience.
I don't think I'll add any voice to any character in this game, but I will keep you in mind in case I do need it for another game! Thank you!
Looking forward to the updates:)
Are the grammar mistakes added intentionally to convey an informal register? They seemed quite jarring to me while I was reading it and there were also quite a few spots where I found the phrasing somewhat awkward.
Day 1
"I-I'm making a m-mess w-washing dishes!" -- This, to me, sounds like she's intentionally making mess(especially with the exclamation mark). "I-I'm just making such a m-mess w-washing dishes." could be better.
"ook, make sure to mop after..." --> "ook, make sure to mop up after..."
Day 2
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"I was so close to make a BIIIG mistake..." --> "I was so close to making a BIIIG mistake..."
Day 3
"If one a night it's not working..." --> "If one a night is not working"
Day 4
Oh, and the "promessed" misspelling that other commenters have mentioned. I actually thought that was a cutesy stylistic choice the first time around.
"They're very sensible..." --> "They're very sensitive..."
--> "Send me the location"
Lastly, there is a misspelling for "pharmacist" as "farmacist" but that seems intentional(?). Overall, a great and enjoyable game!
I just discovered the pending section of comments. You posted so many screenshots that it was probably filtered as spam by itch.io.
All the grammar mistakes are just due to my broken English! :D
I will fix every mistake in the next patch.
You are incredibly helpful, Thank you!
when will be next update ?
that was good keep it going I'm gonna hold this for now I didn't expect that to be short game
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When next!! Cant wait for what happens next
Can't wait to see more of this game its got me hooked! If i were to change one thing about the plot it would be to keep the landlord delusional and not know what's going on instead of randomly checking cameras and seeing her. With that being said I really hope you frequently update this. Not many good nsfw side scrollers with this art style so keep up the great work!
Thank you so much!
I know I know... I' m thinking about removing that final scene and just leave him unaware...
I mean do what you'd like it is your creation after all, but when do you think to update the game? Or maybe some sneak peeks 👀
I am currently working on the backgrounds for the Club and will release some sneak peeks as soon as they are ready!
My hope is to finish by the end of this month, but it all depends on how much time I have available...
My king is come back i always waiting for you
I Promess is crazy
The next update will fix it!
Thank you so much!
tbh i find it could be like a accent or something
YOU ACTUALLY UPDATE THE GAME????
Indeed!
AAAAAAAAAAAAH ESTO ES REAL????????????